LUZ
A FEATURE FILM WRITTEN BY EDUARDO MONTEIRO

“Go into yourself. Search for the reason that bids you write; find out whether it is spreading out its roots in the deepest places of your heart… Confess to yourself whether you would have to die if you were forbidden to write.”
Rainer Maria Rilke, Letters to a Young Poet
NARRATIVE OUTLINE
After losing his job and the relationship that anchored him, Eduardo, a 43-year-old Brazilian advertising professional, feels adrift in a silence he cannot escape. Guided by his enduring interest in astronomy and in an attempt to distance himself from his own collapse, he travels alone to the Atacama Desert in search of silence, of stars, perhaps of some forgotten version of himself.
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In his luggage, he carries a quiet anguish: the sensation of falling behind, of having missed the timing of his own life.
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​From the very beginning, everything unravels: a missed flight, lost luggage, and a burnt-out phone. Stripped of control, Eduardo stumbles upon an eccentric group of travelers led by Mário, a theatrical Chilean guide with a huge heart, colorful scarves, and a poetic way of seeing the world from his worn-out, overly decorated van.
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Inside the van, an unlikely group comes together: Bia, an expansive Brazilian with a loud laugh and sharp gaze; Sarah, a hypochondriac who overplans every step; Tyler, an affectionate man whose cluelessness amuses everyone; Seung, a reserved young Asian man with unexpected gravity; and Maja, a striking traveler whose enigmatic aura unsettles Eduardo’s attention. But above all, his eyes always return to Luz and Eduardo Muñoz, a serene Chilean couple whose quiet complicity unsettles him.
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As the van crosses surreal landscapes - the Valle de la Luna, geysers at dawn, turquoise lagoons shimmering under the thin air - Eduardo drifts between isolation and connection.
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Nights in San Pedro bring music, cheap bars, clumsy attempts at companionship, and the fragile humor that binds strangers. He feels invisible and exposed at the same time, mocked by the younger travelers as if he were already displaced by age.
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Yet, little by little, fragments of tenderness emerge: conversations with Tuti, the extravagant owner of the Don Raúl hotel; strange encounters with a mysterious street flutist; a drunken karaoke night where vulnerability breaks through; and intimate exchanges shared with Bia.
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Through echoes of local music and culture, and flashes of philosophy and astronomy, the film expands beyond a road trip. It becomes a meditation on how the vast and the intimate coexist in every human experience.
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The turning point does not come under the desert sun, but in the intimacy of Luz and Muñoz’s apartment in Santiago. A moment of sushi and wine unfolds with apparent simplicity, until Eduardo notices a subtle gesture that changes everything.
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The truth emerges with disarming naturalness: Muñoz is blind. Eduardo, who had traveled with them for days without realizing it, now sees reflected in them his own blindness. Not of the eyes, but of the spirit.
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From that revelation on, the entire journey acquires new meaning. The desert, once a landscape of despair, becomes a stage for acceptance. In Muñoz’s quiet resilience, Eduardo finds a reminder that life is not about control, nor about chasing answers with urgency, but about the courage to ask for help, the humility to soften the ego, and the strange clarity that comes from seeing the world through someone else’s eyes.
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LUZ is not the story of a man who solves his life in the desert, but of someone who learns to see beyond himself. It is a sensitive meditation on human suffering, the weight of loneliness, the impermanence of life, and the allure of the unknown.
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Through landscapes that seem to belong to another planet, and a humor as fragile as it is liberating, the film reminds us that what truly matters often lies beyond what the eyes can see.
“Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known.”
Carl Sagan

MOVIE INFO
SLOGAN
What we see is never everything
LOGLINE
After losing his job and his relationship, a man in the midst of an identity crisis travels alone to the Atacama Desert in search of silence and answers.
Among strangers and a quietly singular Chilean couple, he discovers that what truly matters is often beyond sight.
SYNOPSIS
After losing his job and his relationship, a Brazilian man in the midst of an identity crisis sets out alone for the Atacama Desert, seeking silence, stars, and a way out of his quiet despair.
A disastrous start — missed flight, lost luggage, and a burnt-out phone — marks the beginning of a trip where he joins an unlikely group of travelers and a quietly singular Chilean couple whose bond will change the way he sees life.
Through surreal landscapes, offbeat humor, and moments of unexpected tenderness, what began as an escape becomes a journey of connection, contemplation, and self-discovery.


NARRATIVE ARCHITECTURE
The screenplay of LUZ is built on solid storytelling principles and a personal style of writing that values subtlety, visual poetry, and emotional precision.
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Every scene, gesture, and image serves a dramatic purpose within the characters’ emotional arcs. The Licancabur volcano, the black screen, the binocular, the night sky, the Wow Radio, and the mysterious figure are not mere aesthetics; each holds symbolic weight in the protagonist’s inner journey and in the transformation of others.
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The narrative trusts the audience’s sensitivity; instead of explaining, it invites the viewer to feel and discover through sensations, visual echoes, and quiet metaphors.
CENTRAL THEME
Through silence, contemplation, and unexpected encounters, the protagonist learns to soften his ego and embrace the fragile beauty of human connection.
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A meditation on love, loss, and the things we cannot always see with our eyes; reminding us that sometimes we must lose in order to truly feel again.

ARTISTIC REFERENCES & INSPIRATIONS
The references that helped shape LUZ blend personal passions, extensive research, visual delicacy, and deeply intimate emotions.
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The film’s aesthetic resonates with sensitive works that treat time, silence, and intelligent dialogue as essential to storytelling. Films such as “Paris, Texas”, “Y Tu Mamá También”, “The Diving Bell and the Butterfly”, “The Motorcycle Diaries”, “Incendies”, “Roma”, “Departures”, “A Hidden Life”, “Invisible”, “Nomadland”, and “The Secret Life of Walter Mitty”, among others.
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In music, inspiration comes from composers like Jóhann Jóhannsson, Brian Eno, Gustavo Santaolalla, Max Richter and Loscil, who translate the desert’s vastness and the soul’s depths into sound.
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Chile’s cultural roots appear in the voices of Inti-Illimani, Violeta Parra, Congreso, Zalo Reyes, and Fernando Milagros, creating a bridge between the Atacama’s landscape and the emotional memories of its characters.
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There is also the freshness of Bratty, The Frames, and Nick Mulvey, whose soundtracks breathe with the story, alongside nostalgic appearances by Madonna and Phil Collins. Melodramatic ballads from the 1980s add unexpected depth and humor, playing from the fictional 103.3 Radio Wow Atacama, a recurring sound element in the film’s universe.
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Visually, LUZ remains natural and emotionally truthful, with real sunlight, authentic sounds of the desert, and frames that honor silence, distance, and the depth of human glances. Together, these elements reinforce the film’s sensory, existential, and profoundly human dimension.All of this reinforces the sensory, existential, and deeply human side of the journey.



GAGS
Throughout the narrative, LUZ weaves small comedic moments that bring freshness, a sense of complicity, and growing intimacy with the characters as the story unfolds.
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Mario’s obsession with Phil Collins; Eduardo’s recurring encounters with an emblematic street flautist; Tyler’s constant inattention when speaking with Seung.
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With apparent simplicity, these gags carry layers of meaning and operate subtly, creating emotional bonds with the audience without breaking the film’s lyrical tone.

EASTER EGGS
LUZ is filled with hidden layers.
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Carefully placed easter eggs weave subtle references to philosophy, astronomy, personal affections, and contemporary pop culture.
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These discreet details add depth for those who enjoy reading between the lines; every gesture, object, or scene may hold a greater meaning for those who notice, always without disrupting the film’s poetry.
PHILOSOPHY, ASTRONOMY AND HUMAN CONDITION
LUZ offers a subtle critique of modern society, not through confrontation but through quiet contrast, touching on themes of narcissism, vanity, egocentrism, relentless acceleration and the pressures of self-demand.
As the characters let go of their digital performances and surrender to the silence of the desert, echoes of four philosophers I personally admire begin to emerge:
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• Lucian Blaga (incomprehension)
• Byung-Chul Han (egocentrism)
• Rainer Maria Rilke (interiority)
• Yukio Mishima (impermanence)
The screenplay was carefully written to gently weave in their central ideas: the mystery of what remains hidden, the fading of the ego, the power and value of artistic presence and the fleeting beauty of existence.
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It carries an echo of astronomy, touched by the poetic vision of Carl Sagan, opening a space for humility before the infinite and for tenderness toward the shortness of our lives.
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These reflections are not presented as direct references, but as a quiet philosophical breeze that moves through the film, subtly shaping its emotional and existential atmosphere.

TONES & GENRES
The film’s predominant tones are poetic and contemplative; melancholic, with social critique and touches of acid humor; sensitive, with restrained emotion and a minimalist aesthetic; and marked by visual lyricism inspired by Terrence Malick, Alfonso Cuarón, Wim Wenders, Hirokazu Koreeda and Pablo Larraín.
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Its blended genres include existential drama as its foundation; an emotional road movie that follows a journey and transformation; and subtle human comedy with gags and eccentric characters.

“Someday, anywhere, at any place, inevitably, you will find yourself.
And that, only that, may be the happiest or the bitterest of your hours.”
Pablo Neruda

CHARACTERS
The construction of the character arcs in LUZ follows a classical logic of transformation; discreet, yet profoundly human.
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Each character undergoes an emotional journey that reveals itself not through obvious statements, but in silences, gestures, and subtle choices that define who they are.
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Behind the lightness of certain moments and the humor of some situations lies a carefully crafted structure that guides the audience through layers of growth, loss, hope, and reconnection.
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The film’s dramatic architecture draws from time-honored narrative principles, yet it seeks to remain spontaneous and organic, like life itself.
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The changes within the characters do not shout; it is in the whisper, trusting the audience, that the film finds its truth.

MAJA
Reserved on the surface, but carrying a world of unsaid things behind her eyes.

TYLER
Clueless, loud, and endearingly offbeat, revealing flashes of sincerity when no one’s expecting it.

MÁRIO
A naturally funny desert poet behind the wheel, full of half-told stories and quiet empathy, guiding others while gently hiding his own scars.

SEUNG
Observant, gentle, and unexpectedly grounded, as if he sees more by speaking less.

SARAH
Anxious, opinionated, and always prepared, clinging to order as a way to tame the unknown.

EDUARDO MUÑOZ
A man who walks through the world without sight, yet sees with a clarity that unsettles and inspires everyone around him.

BIA
Espontaneous, loud, and irresistibly alive, masking tenderness beneath her laughter.

TUTI
Irreverent, maternal, and full of cryptic wisdom disguised as small talk.

LUZ
Calm, attentive, and luminous in the way she sees others, as if carrying the gentle responsibility of being someone else’s eyes and still finding wonder in the world.

EDUARDO MONTEIRO
I no longer dream of having fantastic ideas. That phase, of chasing brilliance, of trying to impress - has passed.
What I feel now is different. It’s not ambition. It’s clarity. LUZ didn’t come to me like an idea; it came like an epiphany. A quiet certainty that this story, born from a personal experience, carries something bigger than me.
I wrote it not to prove anything, but because I couldn’t not write it. For the first time in years, I feel like I have a purpose. Not a goal, not a plan, but a purpose.
And that changes everything.
AUDIENCE & UNIVERSAL APPEAL
LUZ is a film for anyone who has ever felt small or lost in the face of the world. For those who don’t have all the answers, yet still insist on searching for beauty.
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It speaks to an adult, sensitive audience without elitism; to men and women of all ages who value real stories, with characters that mirror what we all are: melancholic, impatient, loving, funny, insecure, sharp… and above all, human.
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LUZ naturally resonates with festival audiences, but also reaches a wider, curious public, even those who might not catch every metaphor. And that’s okay. The film also smiles at those who simply want to feel.
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It’s for those who like to laugh and be moved; for those who have crossed (or are still crossing) their own personal deserts, and can recognize life’s greatness in small and unlikely encounters.
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It’s for those who seek cinema with soul, with no intention to impress, but every intention to touch.
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For those who value an honest screenplay, one that surprises gently and reminds us that life can indeed be lighter. With more acceptance, and less self-imposed pressure.


“In the midst of winter, I found there was, within me, an invincible summer.”
Albert Camus
MOODBOARDS
MESSAGE OF THE FILM
* This sequence illustrates the progressive vision loss caused by Retinitis Pigmentosa.
THE JOURNEY THAT INSPIRED ME TO WRITE "LUZ"
The journey that led me to write LUZ could have been just another one, like any other vacation we take.
It was in a brief instant, just a few seconds, that everything shifted onto a different path.
I carried with me a silent sense of defeat; the impression that I had arrived late to my own life. I traveled in search of air, of some kind of silence that could rescue me from the noise within.
The desert received me with losses and stumbles, as if it wanted to strip me of everything unnecessary. Without luggage, without a phone, without certainties, I had to face myself without disguises. Alone. Just me with myself.
And then came people. Laughter, conversations, gestures shared in the vastness of the Atacama. In that mineral solitude, I discovered that true companionship is not born from perfection, but from the fragility we recognize in one another.
And it was in that simple dinner, in the dry sound of a toast, that a discovery changed the way I looked at life.
I understood that, sometimes, what is essential happens quietly, in the delicacy of the everyday.
LUZ is born from there.
From a journey that began as an escape and ended as a discovery.
From the lesson that we all go through some kind of intimate, personal desert.
From the certainty that what we see is never everything.
STRUCTURE AND STORY MAP
Act 1: The Weight of the Luggage
Block 1: A DISASTROUS START
• Scene 01 - Security Point
• Scene 02 - I Was Just Thinking About Something
• Scene 03 - Visible Effects in 4 Minutes
• Scene 04 - Reflections
• Scene 05 - Maleta Amarilla
• Scene 06 - Bag of Chips
• Scene 07 - El Guardián del Pueblo
• Scene 08 - The Room
• Scene 09 - The Yellow Poncho
• Scene 10 - It Works
• Scene 11 - Qurintucha
• Scene 12 - El Cielo Más Claro del Mundo
• Scene 13 - Sharp Snap
• Scene 14 - Scream
• Scene 15 - The Mysterious Figure
Block 2: WHO ARE THESE PEOPLE?
• Scene 16 - Tengo Un AirTag
• Scene 17 - Sólo Abren a las 10
• Scene 18 - Mário Atacama Premium
• Scene 19 - I Got It, Thank You
• Scene 20 - Call the Paparazzo
• Scene 21 - Phil Collins
• Scene 22 - Andean-Romantic Sanctuary
• Scene 23 - Tocayos
• Scene 24 - Esta Es el Alma de Atacama
• Scene 25 - Tuti con T
• Scene 26 - Muddy Water
• Scene 27 - Loneliness
• Scene 28 - The Myth of Perfect Love
• Scene 29 - She's a Capricorn
• Scene 30 - The Mysterious Figure Again
Act 2: Silent Transformations
Block 3: BONDS, SILENCES AND A SPECIAL PAIR
• Scene 31 - On the Way to the Geysers
• Scene 32 - Wild Atmosphere
• Scene 33 - Let's go, Edu, let's go!
• Scene 34 - Put the Phone Down, Bia
• Scene 35 - Chaski Sonqo
• Scene 36 - Indian Rock
• Scene 37 - Encarna al Neruda
• Scene 38 - T de Traigo Buenas Noticias
• Scene 39 - Ahora No Vas a Parar?
• Scene 40 - Under Pressure PLOT POINT 1
• Scene 41 - Too Much Pisco Sour
• Scene 42 - Don't Let Me Out of Here
Block 4: THE DESERT MIRROR
• Scene 43 - A Lagoon for the Morning After
• Scene 44 - Lagunas Escondidas
• Scene 45 - Promise of Silence
• Scene 46 - Maybe That's What Life Is All About
• Scene 47 - Returning to San Pedro
• Scene 48 - Pachamama
• Scene 49 - Silence
• Scene 50 - You Are More Than Welcome to Try
Block 5: FAREWELLS AND SURPRISES
• Scene 51 - Thanks, Atacama
• Scene 52 - Hijo de Puta
• Scene 53 - They Are About to Close the Gate
• Scene 54 - Que Alegria Te Ver Aqui, Meu Filho
Act 3: Eduardo, Eduardo & Luz
Block 6: EPILOGUE
• Scene 55 - Bienvenido, Tocayo
• Scene 56 - 4 Seconds That Changed Everything PLOT POINT 2
• Scene 57 - Eduardo
• Scene 58 - Eduardo & Luz
• Scene 59 - Closing Text
• Scene 60 - Title Cards
TECHNICAL SHEET
PROJECT OVERVIEW
• Original title: LUZ
• Genre: Poetic drama / Emotional road movie
• Estimated duration: 120 minutes
• Format: Feature film / Color / Digital
• Country of origin: Brazil / Chile
• Languages: Portuguese / Spanish / English
• Status: Completed Screenplay / In Development
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LOCATIONS
• Brazil: Opening scene / airport interiors
• Santiago, Chile: Urban settings / flashbacks / Luz and Eduardo's apartment
• Atacama Desert, Chile: San Pedro de Atacama and region
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SCREENPLAY INFO
• Software: Final Draft 13
• Pages: 123 pages
• Language: Written in Portuguese (English version available)
• Registration USA: WGAW #2307192
• Registration Brazil: Biblioteca Nacional #000984.0313143/2025
• Actual version: LUZ V.10 (revised)
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KEY CREDITS
• Writer (Original screenplay): Eduardo Monteiro
• Director: [to be defined]
• Co-director: [to be defined]
• Director of photography: [to be defined]
• Editing: [to be defined]
• Executive production: [to be defined]
• Associate production: [to be defined]
• Sound design: [to be defined]
• Production & Art direction: [to be defined]


MY HONEST MANIFEST
I’m alone in this.
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No famous names to call.
No production company behind me.
No agent.
No festival accolades.
No major awards on my shelf.
No industry strings to pull.
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What I do have is a true and beautiful story.
A creative mind, a sensitive soul, a life full of moments, and an energy that doesn’t sleep.
A few modest awards that reminded me I could tell stories.
A treatment shaped through sleepless nights.
A screenplay written in Final Draft, revised with care, with doubt and passion.
A pitch deck, a website, and the courage to give myself an honest try.
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I come from the world of advertising, where I’ve written and directed stories for others.
LUZ is the first story I’ve written for myself. My first screenplay for a feature film.
I’m not trying to impress. I’m trying to connect, and to finally step into the world I know I was meant to be in.
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I’ve loved cinema my whole life. I’ve studied it, absorbed it, questioned it.
Not only in classrooms, but through years of passion, instinct, and storytelling.
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I know what makes a story breathe.
And I believe in this one - in its structure, its references, and the emotion that lives on every page.
I know what I’m holding. I know it deserves to be seen.
And I believe it will find its way to someone who understands what it represents.
Because this isn’t just a story I wrote. It’s one I’ve lived and carried, quietly, for years.
And now, it is finally ready to touch others.

“There is a crack in everything. That's how the light gets in.”
Leonard Cohen